A WARNING LABEL FOR LIFE ~ BOB MCNEIL

A Warning Label for Life

Drowsy amid dawn,

I brush my teeth

and shower with city-issued

disinfection byproducts

that may cause cancer.

Abluted in the chromium-6,

lead, and other contaminants,

I call myself clean.

Soft scrambled eggs

go down my gullet

with their heavy metals,

toasted and buttered

carcinogens soon follow.

Water sends a vitamin alphabet

throughout my body

that can spell health or

liver damage, bone pain,

kidney failure, and

increased bleeding to fill

a tome or two. 

Altogether the supplements

tell a tale about me, a man

who tries to stay well

in an unwell world.

Black and sugared

acrylamide gives the alertness

to appreciate my daily dosage

of flavorful poison.

Between bites and sips,

cable stations transmit

news about modern existence

that ancient tragedians would’ve

used for dire dramas.

Aware that many hours

in front of that device

and its myriad stations,

known for thundering adverts

promising entertainment

and information,

is mute about how

it can cause dementia,

depression, Parkinson’s disease,

and high blood pressure.

Restless as a rabbit,

I leap to leave

the sedentary time

and venture out,

welcoming the reality

beyond my door.

Breathing the pollutants

from cars and factories,

my life accepts

its slow decrepitude

as the world

rocket-bolts to ruination. 

by Bob McNeil

Copyright 2025

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5 thoughts on “A WARNING LABEL FOR LIFE ~ BOB MCNEIL

  1. A powerful, poignant piece depicting an ailing author trying to live his best life amidst an unforgiving world chock full of calamity, chaos and contempt.

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  2. A vivid and beautiful poem that depicts how various physical things in the world can affect us physically and emotionally. But as we become aware of this we can protect ourselves from them and gain the mental strength and insight to continue to move on and persevere through each day and challenge.

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  3. A vivid and beautiful poem that depicts how various physical things in the world can affect us physically and emotionally. But as we become aware of this we can protect ourselves from them and gain the mental strength and insight to continue to move on and persevere through each day and challenge.

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